Helen



Welcome to Helen's page.

I am 46 - a person. I love playing the violin and playing. I am an excellent English student and this year my focus is on expanding my vocabulary and improving the structure of my writing.

Here's my work .... I hope you enjoy it.

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Here's my first piece.

It's called the **Bill Nugent Story.**

I was kind of puzzled that my feet carried me forward, along with my comrades because my mind was rebelling. "I can't do a raw thing like that," I thought, but apparently I could........

and then I threw up..................I wish I could vomit myself out of existance.

//I tried hard in this piece to use the vocab of the time. It was a challenge integrating words I don't usually use, but i wanted to make the character's voice sound right. I wanted to show that good people can fnd themselves doing terrible things when they are in a war and I wanted to imply that he was always going to be damaged by what he'd done. I wanted to show that this was a life changing experience, but that the army just wanted him while he was useful. i wanted to show how he was exploited.// Here's my first piece of report writing for the year. It's a **Report on the Bayeux Tapestry.** Insert Report

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